Sales of popular consumer goods is increasing YouTube power of advertisement for real need of people in the society is increasing give your opinion and example for your answer

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In
this
contemporary era coma
advertisement
play
Suggestion
plays
a dominant role in enlighten
consumer
about the
product
. It is believed by one school of thought that, hacking in demand of
consumer
good is going to influence of
advertisement
whilst,
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
believe that people really need that I strongly opposed is argument and the reason for my inclination are articulated in trail paragraphs. To commence with,
although
advertisement
Suggestion
the advertisement
is a key of modern business, it into target a
consumer
to buy the
product
whether it is necessary or not. To cite an example, technological
product
like the AI
baseportable
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base portable
bluetooth
(computing, trademark) a short range wireless technology for connecting different devices such as computers and mobile phones
Bluetooth
speaker of
Amazon which
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Amazon, which
is useless, it is in a developing period, but Lucy
advertisement
attract
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attracts
the masses towards it and the technophiles buying it.
Moreover
, most of the fast food companies offer
handsome amount
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a handsome amount
of of
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of
money to celebrity to do a promotion of their products comma as most of the people blindly follow them, it's definitely boom the sale of
product
full stop according to
survey
Suggestion
the survey
a survey
of the Times of India, in India
this
is of Pepsi increased because it was promoted by the cricket player Virat Kohli all the people know it is hazardous to health. Another element argument to support my inclination is that it is a walk among folk to use a branded
product
it is because of the impact of a glamorous
advertisement
. To illustrate, the electronic products of people are not only but
also
in demand among youngsters as it gives status symbols
last
but not the
least 10
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least, 10
rupees main menu plate their
consumer
by hiding terms and conditions. On the Close scrutiny, I can prove that in
this
technological era the sales of
product
not depend on the quality of
product
Suggestion
the product
but on the
advertisement
as "saying is believing"
.
Accept space
.

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