In nearly all science courses at university, there are significantly more male students than female students. What is the reason for this? What could be done to balance out the number?

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In an educational institute, approximately there are more male students than female students in science courses.
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Pershaps
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Perhaps
, the most important cause of
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problem is
male dominating culture
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the male dominating culture
a male dominating culture
around the world.
people
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People
provide more financial support and permissions only to young boys for higher education.
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, female are less educated. Another main reason is girls are married in their early age and are always considered responsible for household activities and taking care of children's which will not only discourage them but
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force them to sacrifice their dreams.
Inspite
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In spite
of
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, the most effective solutions for
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problem is government should arrange some women educational campaigns to motivate and change their perspective regarding
girls
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girls'
education.
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furthermore
in addition
Furthermore
, government should provide scholarship for them to earn an education or in other hand it can be a great alternative for the financial support they required in
early days
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the early days
. In conclusion,
female
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the female
females
are
demotivated
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to continue their studies as well as, their early marriages by their parents are the major reasons for lesser number of females in science subjects. I
recommand
push for something
recommend
recommended
recommends
that
government
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the government
should provide scholarship for female students and
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should arrange some awareness programmes for educating female in science courses.

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