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In nearly all science courses at university, there are significantly more male students than female students. What is the reason for this? What could be done to balance out the number?

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In an educational institute, approximately there are more male students than female students in science courses.
This
 essay will discuss the possible reasons and workable solutions to enhance the number of female students.
Pershaps
Suggestion
Perhaps
, the most important cause of
this
 problem is
male dominating culture
Suggestion
the male dominating culture
a male dominating culture
 around the world.
people
Suggestion
People
 provide more financial support and permissions only to young boys for higher education.
As a result
, female are less educated. Another main reason is girls are married in their early age and are always considered responsible for household activities and taking care of children's which will not only discourage them but
also
 force them to sacrifice their dreams.
Inspite
Suggestion
In spite
 of
this
, the most effective solutions for
this
 problem is government should arrange some women educational campaigns to motivate and change their perspective regarding
girls
Suggestion
girls'
 education.
furthermore
in addition
Furthermore
, government should provide scholarship for them to earn an education or in other hand it can be a great alternative for the financial support they required in
early days
Suggestion
the early days
. In conclusion,
female
Suggestion
the female
females
 are
demotivated
 to continue their studies as well as, their early marriages by their parents are the major reasons for lesser number of females in science subjects. I
recommand
push for something
recommend
recommended
recommends
 that
government
Suggestion
the government
 should provide scholarship for female students and
also
 should arrange some awareness programmes for educating female in science courses.

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