Some people believe that price is the only consideration when buying something. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion and include relevant example.

Nowadays, there are two main kinds of things which are high and low cost, but, you can not expect their
quality
. Mostly, people buy the things which have high
quality
but low value. Specially, some people who have a lot of
money
buy expensive them and limited edition to show off to others. In
economic
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economics
, we call
this
situation as Veblen Effect. What do you think about
this
situation?
This
essay will discuss about price is not
only consideration
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the only consideration
when buying something. The value of things is not really important; the
quality
of things is important to us. There are several reasons and examples about it.
First
, there are many products which have good
quality
and
proper value
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the proper value
a proper value
proper values
.
For example
, a man went to
convenience store
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the convenience store
a convenience store
to buy a snack with a little
money
, there are many kinds of snacks: expensive, popular, cheap and his
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
snacks. If he has a lot of
money
he can buy all of them,
however
, he must choose one snack. In
this
case, he will buy his
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
snack, because, it's taste is proofed by him.
Next reason
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The next reason
is that showing off give you nothing without emotion just a moment. Showing off is not a good habit for yourself. To do
this
, you have to use your quietly many
money
for that time, so, people can feel jealous and want to be close
with
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to
you. If you did not use plenty
money
, they will not do that.
Lastly
, your mind is more important than cost. Whatever, it is cheap, if you enjoyed it,
that is
okay for you. It is
more better
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better
than
waste
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wasting
money
and feel
depress
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depressed
. People are increasingly attracted by precious things who showed off. In my view, please do not be attracted by them and use your
money
wisely, so, you can enjoy your time.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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