Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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The process in which people, ideas, technology and goods are exchanged worldwide in order to develop more interaction between countries is called

globalization

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Globalization

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plays an important role in boosting the economy of any country.

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, I strongly agreed that the benefits of

this

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development are more significant as compared to its drawbacks. (53) We had seen in the past the people had limited resources and lack of technology.

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, they were unable to communicate and develop relations with i

nternational community.

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the international community

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, there was no concept of

globalization

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in the past. (37) Presently, the

globalization

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is revolutionizing the entire

world

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around us. Nowadays, it is not only providing s

imilar way

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a similar way

of life in different countries, but

also

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making our lives more comfortable.

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, consumers are now able to buy s

imilar product

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a similar product

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

270 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

globalization
diversity
homogenization
cultural assimilation
global connection
local businesses
economic impact
consumerism
standardization
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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Fully explain your ideas

In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative?

Some people think young people should be free to choose his or her job, but other people think they should be realistic and think more about their future. Discuss both views, and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that it would be beneficial if employees worked three or four days per week rather than five or six days. Why is this? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many people are afraid to leave their homes because of the fear of crime. Some believe that more actions should be taken to prevent crime. Others feel that little can be done. Discuss both views and give your opinion.