In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard in their studies. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

In recent years, youngsters live a sedentary lifestyle due to their lack of

time

to relax even to play around with their peers.

Moreover

, the school duties sometimes bring them in full of pressure. I strongly believe that

this

case is caused by the parental pressure and

university

competition

.

Therefore

,

this

essay will look into the causes provided by some solutions. Parents sometimes bring pressure

toward

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to

the children’s life since parents demand the children to pursue a higher future career. They tend to encourage children to spend their

time

for

study

, even they are not afraid to spend money for

children

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children's

education.

For instance

, parents will put the children into several courses which are relevant to their

study

. They believe that bringing children to the course will pose a help to master their studies at school.

Therefore

, there is no spare

time

for young people to enjoy their life. On the one hand,

university

competition

force students to

study

much harder

since

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for

university

just

recruits or

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recruits, or

accepts students who have higher grades. Entering

university

level will create a high

competition

among others nationally even internationally.

Moreover

, the

university

has a high standard as a requirement.

Consequently

, to gain the standard, young people should make good preparation.

Therefore

, it sometimes makes young people under-pressure even depression. They will try to do something that enables them to gain their goals

such

as

study

a lot. As the result, the best solution to cope with these problems is the awareness of parents. Parents should realise that their actions can cause anxiety and stress among the children.

Therefore

, bring back the role of parents is essential in

this

case. They should understand the

children’s

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child’s

condition

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condition, thus

thus

children can use their spare

time

to stress-

relief

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relief, such

such

as go on vacation or hang out with their peers.

Additionally

, affirmative action is needed to overtake the

university

case. The government should expand the number of universities,

thus

it can reduce the

competition

level and young people would

then

have a variety of choices. As the result, youngsters would be able to spend their teenage

time

with joy and happiness. To sum up, the understanding between parents and children will bring a beautiful harmony and followed by a support from the government.

Therefore

, it is easy for youngsters

to suffer

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suffer

from

this

problem.