In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard in their studies. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

In recent years, youngsters live a sedentary lifestyle due to their lack of

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to relax even to play around with their peers.

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, the school duties sometimes bring them in full of pressure. I strongly believe that

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case is caused by the parental pressure and

university

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competition

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.

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,

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essay will look into the causes provided by some solutions. Parents sometimes bring pressure

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the children’s life since parents demand the children to pursue a higher future career. They tend to encourage children to spend their

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for

study

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, even they are not afraid to spend money for

children

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children's

education.

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, parents will put the children into several courses which are relevant to their

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. They believe that bringing children to the course will pose a help to master their studies at school.

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, there is no spare

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for young people to enjoy their life. On the one hand,

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competition

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force students to

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much harder

since

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for

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just

recruits or

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recruits, or

accepts students who have higher grades. Entering

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level will create a high

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among others nationally even internationally.

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, the

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has a high standard as a requirement.

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, to gain the standard, young people should make good preparation.

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, it sometimes makes young people under-pressure even depression. They will try to do something that enables them to gain their goals

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study

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a lot. As the result, the best solution to cope with these problems is the awareness of parents. Parents should realise that their actions can cause anxiety and stress among the children.

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, bring back the role of parents is essential in

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case. They should understand the

children’s

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child’s

condition

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condition, thus

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children can use their spare

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to stress-

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relief, such

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as go on vacation or hang out with their peers.

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, affirmative action is needed to overtake the

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case. The government should expand the number of universities,

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it can reduce the

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level and young people would

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have a variety of choices. As the result, youngsters would be able to spend their teenage

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with joy and happiness. To sum up, the understanding between parents and children will bring a beautiful harmony and followed by a support from the government.

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, it is easy for youngsters

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suffer

from

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problem.