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Some People think that students who achieve the best academic results should be rewarded. Other believe it is more important to reward student who show improvement. Discuss both opinion and views.

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It is often argued that the students with higher grades should be rewarded with their academic performance.
However
, It is equally important to recognize the efforts of those students who show improvement to motivate them to perform well in the future. Traditionally, students maintaining highest grades are rewarded in almost all the education sector of the globe. It not only boost the level of motivation of those students, but
also
 elevate the standard of education and
hence
 promote more competitive environment within an institution. More Importantly, in order to maintain the standards and compete with other top notch institutes, teachers are more focused and devoted towards the performance of students who are already top ranked and reward the students timely to incentivize them.
For instance
, students with
first
,
second
 and
third
 position are rewarded with gold, silver and bronze medal respectively during their convocation in universities over the world. On the flip side of the coin,
such
 grading systems can be extremely demoralizing to the students who are putting strenuous efforts to improve their academic results.
Such
 students are just a step away to get their foot in the door and all they need is some attention and encouragement.
For example
, a school in Italy organizes a road trip every month for those students who show improvement in their grades.
Such
 activities promote competitive environment and push other students
also
 to work hard and improve their grades. In conclusion, without any denial, position holders should be rewarded and recognized, but concurrently, the education system should
also
 focus on the students who are improving gradually because
such
 students can sometimes become a valuable asset for the nation.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
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