Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
For the new generations, working in a
company
or organizations is being unpopular, and the self- employed is seems to be a common trend in recent years. In my opinion, the limit chance of promotion and the lower salary are the main reason for Use synonyms
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problem.
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problem, the average salary of a university fresh graduate student was about $12000 in 10 years ago but now still unchanged. The increasing wage and inflation are not balanced, the life of people become more difficult to live.Linking Words
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the chance of promotion is minimal, most of the position Accept space
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company
. All of below reason cause the people being self-employed, they can earn what they pay as well as no need work for others. Use synonyms
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phenomenon like a virus to spread out for all people and self-employed become popular as well.
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Although
self-employed are benefits to the people, there is some disadvantage for it. Self-employed people need to afford a more massive Linking Words
risk
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company
or organization, all the things in the Use synonyms
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, the workload of self-employed is higher than a worker. The need to manage a whole Linking Words
company
, all the things need to start with themselves. The typical worker only needs to finish a part of work from the Use synonyms
company
.
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and effort. They can earn more than the normal Use synonyms
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...