Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?
For the new generations, working in a
company
or organizations is being unpopular, and the self- employed is seems to be a common trend in recent years. In my opinion, the limit chance of promotion and the lower salary are the main reason for this
problem.
Since inflation in the world, our daily expense is continuing
to increase. Everything we buy become more expensive. Suggestion
has continued
For example
, the average cost of a lunch in ten years ago was around $30 but now need $60, it pays for double. Face
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The face
to
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of
this
problem, the average salary of a university fresh graduate student was about $12000 in 10 years ago but now still unchanged. The increasing wage and inflation are not balanced, the life of people become more difficult to live.Moreover
,
the chance of promotion is minimal, most of the position Accept space
,
was occupy
by older, people are challenging to get a superior position in the Suggestion
occupied
was occupied
company
. All of below reason cause the people being self-employed, they can earn what they pay as well as no need work for others. This
phenomenon like a virus to spread out for all people and self-employed become popular as well.
Although
self-employed are benefits to the people, there is some disadvantage for it. Self-employed people need to afford a more massive risk
for other people. When they are self-employed, they are the founder of the company
or organization, all the things in the company
(including structure, employee, profit, etc.) will
affect their earning. Suggestion
Will
On the other hand
, the people who work in a company
or organization do not have those problems and worried. They afford a lower risk
than self-employed. Also
, the workload of self-employed is higher than a worker. The need to manage a whole company
, all the things need to start with themselves. The typical worker only needs to finish a part of work from the company
.
In conclusion, the self-employed required a high risk
and effort. They can earn more than the normal worker but
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worker, but
also
need to afford the equal risk
and pay equal effort.Submitted by qq1368919013 on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...