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Both the reading and the

lecture

were talking about the usage of the great houses and why did the

Chaco

Canyon built it. The reading suggests that there is three theories that can explain that.

However

the

lecture

disagree

Suggestion

disagrees

. The

lecture

states that none of these three theories are convincing.

First

, the reading states that the

Chaco

structure was purely residential. The

Chaco

's houses

looks

Suggestion

look

strikingly similar to the large well-known apartment buildings which many people have lived for centuries.

However

the

lecture

refutes. The

lecture

states that the

Chaco

structure was not used as a residential

apartments

Suggestion

apartment

Although

the

Chaco

outside structure looks like the native American houses, the inside is totally different and cause serious doubts. It is said to be built

for

being one more than three

four

hundred people, but the fire places to cook inside the houses are way less than hundred.

However there

Accept comma addition

However, there

is a hundred rooms

inside

Suggestion

the building, there is only ten fireplaces found. So

this

assumption

can not

cannot

be true.

Second

, the

reading

Suggestion

reader

assumes that the

Chaco

buildings were used to store food supply. They have a huge supply of maize that needs to be stored somewhere, and the size of these buildings is suitable for the

storage

However

the

lecture

refuses. The

lecture

states that the Chacos buildings

can not

cannot

be used for

storage

Although

it's

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

size is suitable for the

storage

, there

Suggestion

are

no traces of maize on the floor of the building.

Also there

Accept comma addition

Also, there

Suggestion

are

storage

containers found in the building. If the place were used for

storage

there must be evidence for that, like the ones they found in the other

storage

places.

Consequently

, it

can not

cannot

be a

storage

space.

Third

, the reading states that the houses were used as ceremonial

centers

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centres

Centers

. The archaeologists found an enormous pile of old material that contain

large number

Suggestion

a large number

of broken pots like the ones found in

Pueblo Alto house

Suggestion

the Pueblo Alto house

, which may be an evidence that people gathered there for special ceremonies.

However

the

lecture

disagrees. The

lecture

states that the building being used for ceremonial purposes is not supported. The archaeologists have

founds

Suggestion

found

many different

thing

Suggestion

things

in the house not only the broken pots like sand, stones and construction materials. If it was not removed during the construction, the pots might be the same, they are just trash. And it is completely different than the Pueblo Alto house, which contain many other ceremonial materials not just broken pots.

This

is why it

can not

cannot

be used for ceremonial purposes.

Wed Jan 15 2020

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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8
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
20
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

415 words

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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