Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them, other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them . Discuss both views

#people #friends

Having friends is very important in individual's daily

life

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The

individuals

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individual

individual's

opinion

diverge

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diverges

on having like-minded friends

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or having friends with different thoughts and beliefs that can oppose with us

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certain occasions. The essay will discuss both sides of view before I reach to a final conclusion

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On the one hand

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having friends with similar ideas is advantageous

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firstly

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Firstly

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less conflicts will be created

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having people with same way of thinking will provide a comfortable environment

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where everyone will easily share their ideas

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In other

words less

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words, less

arguments will be seen

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To cite an example

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people from a similar profession

willeasily

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will easily

interact with

eachother

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each other

rather than from a completely separate field

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secondly

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Secondly

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friendship

will

last

longer if we choose people with

same taste

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the same taste

as we have

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If we maintain our circle with those who have the ideas which attract us

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then

we can rely on that

friendship

for a long period of time as we may not get into any controversy

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On the other hand

, advocate of selecting verities of friends

have

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has

its own benefits

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Primarily

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enhance

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enhances

our learning

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since each person shares a unique idea and each of their prospective will teach us something new

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for

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For

instance a researched held in university of Harward

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most of the students tend to maintain

friendship

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a friendship

from a field which are not the same as their own and they were holding the belief that it

halps

give help or assistance; be of service

helps

them to gain something they didn't know before

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Furthermore

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diversity will give us

chance

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a chance

the chance

of avoiding any errors in our

life

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because the different way of thinking the persons around us have will give

different solution

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a different solution

to overcome a problem so it will lead us to an error free

life

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To conclude, it will not be gainsaid that having friends with unique thinking will help us to have an easy and

life long

continuing through life

lifelong

friendship

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but I personally believe friends of variant category give us more

benifits

financial assistance in time of need

benefits

to learn and solve our problems.

Wed Jan 15 2020

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8Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
44Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

350 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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emotional well-being
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Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them, other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them . Discuss both views

Fully explain your ideas

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Over poulation is a masure problem What causes it? and how to resolve it?

Some people believe that it is good for a country's culture to import foreign movies and TV programmes. Other think that it is better to produce these locally. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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