"Prevention is better than cure." Our of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventive measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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the government invested in the state's

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, among that more than 50% of the budget should be transferred to the fitness education and

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centres, rather than using huge

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on treating the patients.

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essay agrees with the statement given above in sequence to save

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human lives.

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of all, the usage of

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will be less at the starting stage of the disease

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of spending it on the

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stage of the fever. Because

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is the important thing on the earth, everyone needs

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to survive. Some people can afford more on treatment, and some won't. So we should take care of our

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from beginning.

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, one of my friend's is suffering from kidney problem

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some stones have developed in his stomach. As he was more aware of the

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, he himself took care of his

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with necessary medications.

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he solved the issue at an initial stage. He

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saved

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rather than leaving his

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condition to a high level.

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, every living thing is very important on the earth and we should look after it every time. By putting more in aid-caring institute's is more worth than spending high on treatments. So that public can become more aware of their

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, and they start caring about them. In the instance, the USA government in 2003 made a sentence that more

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must be sent to

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and

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education courses. From that public in the USA became aware of their life and illness rate was successfully decreased. In conclusion, rather than using higher income on treating the disease the public association should transfer more rupees to the

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and wellness education centres. In order to save the previous lives and

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the wealthiest.