Most of the world's problems are caused by overpopulation. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that many countries in the

world

are facing

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are faced

will be faced

with one of the most serious problem

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which is

massive increase

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a massive increase

the massive increase

in

world's population

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the world's population

. Personally

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I completely agree with

this

view because of its negative effect on human development and

environment

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the environment

. There are a variety of reasons why the dramatic growth of population in the

world

brings a harmful effect on the quality of human's life and global budget as well.

Firstly

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over-population phenomenon has resulted in the lack of accomodation for a large

number

of people,

specially

to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common

especially

with those living in crowded cities and metropolitan areas.

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reason because

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reason, because

the small

number

of available housing are not able to meet the demand for the need of living facility.

As a result

, if people do not have any shelter

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they mostly will build an illegal house on the prohibited sectors

such

as riverbank or top of the hill which are dangerous for them.

Furthermore

, the unemployment rate would be likely to higher because of joblessness that profoundly affected

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by

not only

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not only world's economy, which

the not only world's economy which

the not only world's economy the not only world's economy which

world

's economy which makes it go

down but

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down, but

also

social issues

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in

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particular

is the rising of violent

criminal

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crime

in the community.

Consequently

, with the

world

's economy is stagnant and undeveloped, the whole society has witnessed the majority of citizens who turn into offenders with the hopes of earning enough money for making end meets. Apart from the practical concerns expressed above, I believe that

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at a higher position than

over

-population would lead to several issues which are associated with living environment.

Firstly

, some

consequences including

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consequences, including

air pollution, contamination of water or land which stem from the massive

number

of transportation users or the arising of industrial areas.

For example

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over using a mean of transport mode burning fossil fuel, applying chemical fertilisers into the field of

agricultural

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agriculture

and discharging toxic waste into water resources all lead to greenhouse gas emission that causes environmental damage severely.

Secondly

, some endangered species of animal would be on the brink of

extinctionif

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extinction if

there is no longer living inhabitant.

This

would mean that people are cutting down

tree

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a tree

trees

or even killing animals for living purposes as building houses, schools, hospitals, modern facilities and being main food resources for the massive

number

of civilians in the

world

. In conclusion, I believe that the phenomenon of over-population should be top-priority concern to many national governments in the

world

.