The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.
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The given diagram illustrates the design and location of
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wave
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the wave
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energy
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machine
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. It is clearly seen that the
wave
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energy
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machine
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is cemented in water. The design of
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wave
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the wave
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energy
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machine
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is like there are many spaces and gaps
are
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provided for the
air flow
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airflow
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. There is one gap at bottom of
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machine
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the machine
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at
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left
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the left
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side for water flow . We can clearly see that there are two main components of the
wave
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energy
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machine
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and they are
electric
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genrator
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generator
and turbine. The electric turbine is
coupled with
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the turbine. And the
machine
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is having two chambers as shown in
diagram
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the diagram
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. The
wave
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energy
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machine
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can be used for two locations. One is for large waves and the other is for small waves. If
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machine
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the machine
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is installed at
large
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the large
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wave
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side
then
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it will provide higher output and if the
machine
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is installed at
small
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the small
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wave
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side
then
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it will provide lower output. But
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the demerit
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of the large
wave
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is it will have
large
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a large
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installations
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cost. And the advantage of
small
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the small
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wave
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is it will have low installation
cost
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words wave, energy, machine with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "wave" was used 11 times.
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