Some people say that we must send our parents to old age home when they reach 60. However other think that they must be taken care at home. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Elders are the backbone of

entire family

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an entire family

the entire family

and support system for their children. A few individuals think that parents should be left at senior

age

home

after the

age

of 60, whereas remaining believe that

home

is the best place to serve them.

However

,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

believe that at

this

age

of life they should not be left alone devoid of family members.

Although

, old

age

societies may entice elderly people as they get entertained round the clock.

That is

to say, myriad of recreational activities say yoga classes and devotional trips often

rejuvinates

cause (a stream or river) to erode, as by an uplift of the land

rejuvenate

rejuvenates

their mind, body and soul.

Moreover

,

company

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the company

of fellow senior members

allow

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allows

them to share their thoughts of wisdom thereby making their lives more

cherishable

relating to or characterized by charity

charitable

.

For instance

, single parent who have lost their spouse untimely can get good

oppertunity

a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances

opportunity

to speak their

heart

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hearts

out among others. But, if children

keeps

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keep

on sending parents to

such

places,

then

they can become irresponsible towards their duties and might start ignoring them in the need of the hour.

However

,

home

is the

appropiate

suitable for a particular person or place or condition etc

appropriate

place to provide them with comfort and love.

In other words

, at the

age

of 60 one not only wants

contended

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to contend

family

life but

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life, but

also

needs to spend

rest

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the rest

of their lives with grand children. Indeed,

this

makes them live longer and disease free. To

examplify

be characteristic of

exemplify

,

mortality rate

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the mortality rate

of old people in day care homes is quite high compared to

ones

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the ones

living with their families.

Additionally

, former

also

suffers from depression, homesickness

thus

are

victim

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victims

a victim

the victim

of untimely deaths.

Therefore

, ambience at

home

is a natural healer and young by

heart

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heart, thus

thus

multiplying their health and lives.

Hence

,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

believe that parents should always be kept by our side through every phase of their lives.

This

not only makes them

happy but

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happy, but

also

allow them to share their life experience with future generation thereby making them more efficient and responsible. In the light of what we have discussed above, it is justifiable to say that in order to cherish the company and boost the health of our

grand parents

a parent of your father or mother

grandparents

and parents they should not be left at old

age

clubs. As it may trigger row of health issues.

Although

, they may feel entertained

initially but

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initially, but

in the long run elders usually feel lonely and might end up their lives in pain.