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Some people say that the education system is the only critical factor in the development of a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Education plays an important role in the development of a
country
. Some
believes
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believe
 that it is the only crucial factor in the progress of a nation. I partially agree with it as there are other factors which are essential too.
Firstly
, we must acknowledge the education system of the
country
 as it is responsible for many things which are
need
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needed
 to be considered for the growth of the
country
. There are many
concept
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concepts
 that depends on a person's education what he/she acquires. For
instances
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instance
, a person who gets
theortical
concerned primarily with theories or hypotheses rather than practical considerations
theoretical
vertical
 and practical knowledge at the same will be more successful that individual who
just get
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just gets
theortical
concerned primarily with theories or hypotheses rather than practical considerations
theoretical
theatrical
vertical
 things. So, it will be beneficial for a
country
 as it will lead it towards the
delevelopment
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
.
Secondly
, an educated person is necessary in every field whether its Medical, Industry
,
Accept space
,
Politics and so on. A literate man can bring innovation and creativity at
workplace
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the workplace
a workplace
 which
ultimatally
as the end result of a succession or process
ultimately
 brings progress in the
country
.
On the contrary
, there are other things which are essential for the overall development of a nation
such
 as employment, medicine, finance and many more. Education is not
only factor
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the only factor
 which contribute maximum
for
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to
 the progress
that is
 one of them for it. To conclude, education is pivotal for every
country
 so that it can develop at high
pace but
Accept comma addition
pace, but
 it is not the only one aspect which is required for a nation. I believe all the aspects are important for a
country
 to grow in terms of development.

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