You recently had lunch at a restaurant and accidentally left behind a valuable item. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: When and where you lunched What item you left behind What you would like them to do

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Dear Madam, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I accidentally left behind my iPhone 16 Pro Max at your restaurant. I am a regular customer of your bar with my friends. Because your restaurant is located opposite our university. What's more, your canteen's meals meet my demands 100 per cent. The things I like the most in your cafeteria are desserts. That's why we often visit it. Recently, I had lunch at your restaurant called "Velvet Bistro" with my friends. But I accidentally left behind my iPhone 16 Pro Max at your canteen. I can not afford to buy one at the moment. My dad bought me that phone for my birthday. It was really precious to me. When I noticed that I left behind my phone, I was stressed out and I decided to write a letter to you. I would be grateful if you find my phone. Please in case you find my contact, let me know. Once again, I am really upset about

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situation. I am looking forward to your response. Yours truly, Billura

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coherence and cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph has a clear focus and stick to it. For example, the introduction could be separated from a detailed description of the item left behind.

coherence and cohesion

While the context of your letter is clear, try to be more concise and organized in presenting your ideas. This will help the reader to follow your letter more easily.

task achievement

You may want to add more polite requests or expressions to enhance the formality of your tone, making it more suitable for a letter to a manager.

task achievement

You provided a clear description of the lost item and explained its significance to you, which adds a personal touch to your letter.

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You maintained a polite tone throughout your letter, which is important when addressing a manager.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

181 words

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The Closing

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