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University students are increasingly studying abroad as part of their studies. Do the advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from you knowledge or experience.

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Going abroad for studying is becoming popular
to
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with
 the university scholars as part of their
studies
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study
. While, the cost of
airplane
 ticket is very expensive to them, they can learn more high quality of study. One says that it is a part of
challenge but
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the challenge, but
the challenge but
a challenge but
 they can increase their abilities. Most students go to the institution which is around the world to find better teacher who is good at teaching and have a good study habit.
For example
, In Harvard university,
this
 place is famous,
also
, there are many popular teachers. If a person
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrolled
enrol
this
 institution, he can learn more than others. Because of
this
 benefit, they go to other countries.
On the other hand
, the cost of
airplane
a hose that carries air under pressure
airline
 ticket and living in other countries can be
heavy burden
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a heavy burden
 to students. Because, they do not have enough time to earn money during they focus on their career. For instants, if a person
find
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finds
 Korean to study about technology,
difference price
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the difference price
 of money can make him confused,
also
, the value of things are very high
in contrast
 with other countries. So, it is complicated to
persue
carry out or participate in an activity; be involved in
pursue
parse
purse
 their education. Taking education overseas
has became
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has become
 dramatically popular. Even though, they should pay a lot of money, they can catch a chance to meet a good teacher. In my view, advantages are heavier than disadvantages.

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