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Living in large cities today poses many problems for people. What are these problems? Should governments encourage more people to live in smaller towns?

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It is true that big cities cause numerous difficulties for the residents. While several problems can be considered, I agree with the viewpoint that the states can tackle these problems with shifting the
population
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 to other towns. If a big
city
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 occupies with overloaded
population
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, it will lead to different challenges for people and society, because of the following reasons.
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, a great number of people who live in a big
city
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 always cause air pollution, since they normally prefer to use their personal cars.
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,
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 issue would jeopardize the residents’ health.
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, governments would have severe problems to provide facilities for these intensive
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.
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, it has been proved that in big
cities people
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cities, people
 usually reside with distinct cultures and religions, and
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 fact would create conflicts among the citizens of a large
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. The beliefs can be different between cultures;
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, while something is not problematic in one society, it would be annoying and offensive to another one.
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, governments can encourage people to migrate small towns
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 of crowded cities. States should allocate proper funds for the reconstruction of small towns. They
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 have to provide
recreation
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recreational
 facilities to attract families to other lands of the country. It would be beneficial for people and state, if the
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 distributed properly across the county.
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, states are the main regulator of
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 issue, and residents of large cities will cooperate with the government, when they perceive that can opt for another option with better concessions. In conclusion, living in a crowded
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 the state, and states can tackle the problem with providing facilities in small towns.
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