Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Building

repairs

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repair

activity

mainly focus

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mainly focusses

to maintain the proper condition of

building

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a building

the building

buildings

.But some people think that too much money is

expending

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expended

to reconstruct old buildings

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so those should be

knock

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knocked

down and built modern ones.

This

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essay

discuss

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discusses

why the old buildings

has

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have

to be repaired and preserved. To commence with

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some buildings are playing a key role in educating the future generation about historical facts and culture. Knocking down those ancient buildings would be a lose to the

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generation and

also

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its a disrespect to the past.

For instance

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there are various historical monuments and places in

India which

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India, which

reflects the culture and cannot be

destruct

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destructed

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Therefore these

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Therefore, these

buildings should be repaired at any cost and maintain.

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, there would be some old buildings where individuals have valuable memories and reconstructing it may not give its real touch.

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such

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Such

buildings must be closely correlated with

individuals life

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an individual's life

individual's life

the individual's life

individuals' life

individual life

and have great meaning in various aspects.

For instance

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, in my state the

ancestoral

inherited or inheritable by established rules (usually legal rules) of descent

ancestral

home

have

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has

great importance and value and people tend to conserve for generations. To conclude

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old buildings are meaningful to people and

also

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it shows the culture and history of the respective place

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Maintaining and keeping it safe in its exact way is not a bad idea.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

206 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Preservation
Restoration
Demolition
Architectural heritage
Cultural significance
Tourist attraction
Urban landscape
Sustainability
Conservation
Economic benefits
Historical landmarks
Urban renewal
Infrastructure
Maintenance costs
Modern amenities
Building regulations
Community identity
Heritage conservation

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Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Your opinion

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