Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Building
repairs
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repair
activity
mainly focus
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mainly focusses
to maintain the proper condition of
building
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a building
the building
buildings
.But some people think that too much money is
expending
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expended
to reconstruct old buildings
,
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,
so those should be
knock
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knocked
down and built modern ones.
This
essay
discuss
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discusses
why the old buildings
has
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have
to be repaired and preserved. To commence with
,
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,
some buildings are playing a key role in educating the future generation about historical facts and culture. Knocking down those ancient buildings would be a lose to the
next
generation and
also
its a disrespect to the past.
For instance
,
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,
there are various historical monuments and places in
India which
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India, which
reflects the culture and cannot be
destruct
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destructed
.
Therefore these
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Therefore, these
buildings should be repaired at any cost and maintain.
Moreover
, there would be some old buildings where individuals have valuable memories and reconstructing it may not give its real touch.
such
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Such
buildings must be closely correlated with
individuals life
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an individual's life
individual's life
the individual's life
individuals' life
individual life
and have great meaning in various aspects.
For instance
, in my state the
ancestoral
inherited or inheritable by established rules (usually legal rules) of descent
ancestral
home
have
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has
great importance and value and people tend to conserve for generations. To conclude
,
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,
old buildings are meaningful to people and
also
it shows the culture and history of the respective place
.
Accept space
.
Maintaining and keeping it safe in its exact way is not a bad idea.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Preservation
  • Restoration
  • Demolition
  • Architectural heritage
  • Cultural significance
  • Tourist attraction
  • Urban landscape
  • Sustainability
  • Conservation
  • Economic benefits
  • Historical landmarks
  • Urban renewal
  • Infrastructure
  • Maintenance costs
  • Modern amenities
  • Building regulations
  • Community identity
  • Heritage conservation
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