Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #money #buildings #ones

Building

repairs

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repair

activity

mainly focus

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mainly focusses

to maintain the proper condition of

building

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a building

the building

buildings

.But some people think that too much money is

expending

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expended

to reconstruct old buildings

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so those should be

knock

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knocked

down and built modern ones.

This

essay

discuss

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discusses

why the old buildings

has

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have

to be repaired and preserved. To commence with

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some buildings are playing a key role in educating the future generation about historical facts and culture. Knocking down those ancient buildings would be a lose to the

generation and

also

its a disrespect to the past.

For instance

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there are various historical monuments and places in

India which

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India, which

reflects the culture and cannot be

destruct

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destructed

Therefore these

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Therefore, these

buildings should be repaired at any cost and maintain.

Moreover

, there would be some old buildings where individuals have valuable memories and reconstructing it may not give its real touch.

such

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Such

buildings must be closely correlated with

individuals life

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an individual's life

individual's life

the individual's life

individuals' life

individual life

and have great meaning in various aspects.

For instance

, in my state the

ancestoral

inherited or inheritable by established rules (usually legal rules) of descent

ancestral

home

have

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has

great importance and value and people tend to conserve for generations. To conclude

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old buildings are meaningful to people and

also

it shows the culture and history of the respective place

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Maintaining and keeping it safe in its exact way is not a bad idea.

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Preservation
Restoration
Demolition
Architectural heritage
Cultural significance
Tourist attraction
Urban landscape
Sustainability
Conservation
Economic benefits
Historical landmarks
Urban renewal
Infrastructure
Maintenance costs
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Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In some places old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion