Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Building
repairs
activity Suggestion
repair
mainly focus
to maintain the proper condition of Suggestion
mainly focusses
building
.But some people think that too much money is Suggestion
a building
the building
buildings
expending
to reconstruct old buildingsSuggestion
expended
,
so those should be Accept space
,
knock
down and built modern ones. Suggestion
knocked
This
essay discuss
why the old buildings Suggestion
discusses
has
to be repaired and preserved.
To commence withSuggestion
have
,
some buildings are playing a key role in educating the future generation about historical facts and culture. Knocking down those ancient buildings would be a lose to the Accept space
,
next
generation and also
its a disrespect to the past.For instance
,
there are various historical monuments and places in Accept space
,
India which
reflects the culture and cannot be Accept comma addition
India, which
destruct
.Suggestion
destructed
Therefore these
buildings should be repaired at any cost and maintain.
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Therefore, these
Moreover
, there would be some old buildings where individuals have valuable memories and reconstructing it may not give its real touch.such
buildings must be closely correlated with Suggestion
Such
individuals life
and have great meaning in various aspects. Suggestion
an individual's life
individual's life
the individual's life
individuals' life
individual life
For instance
, in my state the ancestoral
home inherited or inheritable by established rules (usually legal rules) of descent
ancestral
have
great importance and value and people tend to conserve for generations.
To concludeSuggestion
has
,
old buildings are meaningful to people and Accept space
,
also
it shows the culture and history of the respective place .
Maintaining and keeping it safe in its exact way is not a bad idea.Accept space
.
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