Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their families. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments on both sides, and say which side you personally support.
It is widely accepted by one group of people that kids supposed to stay with family all their off hours.
Opposers
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Appraisers
Appeasers
however
, complain of negative sides. In this
essay two sides will be stated. From my point of view, the children“s
growing should include have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
is
interact
with peers.
Admittedly, parents or their replaces act as Suggestion
interaction
role model
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role models
a role model
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words grownups copy
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absence
of several issues. And Suggestion
the absence
this
undertaking, undoubtedly, results in settling ground rules. Furthermore
, spending time
with family offers a chance, to some extent, control the familiarities and actions. For instance
, the folks are in real-time
awareness about conversations, activities and infatuations by spending as much as possible
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much time as possible
time
with their children. Reducing the risk of crimes like abduction
or coming under the negative pressure of peers is the Suggestion
an abduction
another
argument.
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
On the contrary
, every boy and girl deserve rights to spend time
without parents and several factors contribute to beneficiality
. in a beneficial manner
beneficially
Firstly
, engaging in social life with friends maintain
basic skills Suggestion
maintains
such
as team skills, collaborating and negotiating skills, as well as emotional field
including empathy and regretting. In order to be self-dependent the offspring should abandon the comfort zone of parental care. Suggestion
an emotional field
Consequently
, growing up will reach a successful life with skills
of socializing. Suggestion
the skills
In addition
, peers can enhance one“s creativity and imagination by involving a kid to a
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an
activities
.
To sum up, while wasting spare Suggestion
activity
time
with family seems superficially advantageous, the lack of interact
with peers is Suggestion
interaction
serious drawback
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a serious drawback
Instead
, going out with friends offers superb opportunities.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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