There is an increasing trend around the world of married couples deciding not to have children. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for couples who decide to do this.
It is quite obvious that, the manner of not having children after marriage has its disadvantages, as well as its advantages. The wise person is the one who makes an excellent utilization of its benefits and avoids its drawbacks.
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On one hand, some couples argue that, the deficits of having children outweigh its benefits for the following reasons. Linking Words
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, the fear of failing in growing up the children properly, because the parents have no experience in how to take care about the food and health of younger and that will increase the responsibility of parents towards their children and increase the feel of worry about them. Linking Words
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, the couple tends to have a leisure time with each other. Linking Words
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, if a couple got married in their early twenties, they would spend more luxury time in travelling and discovering new places.
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, other couples hold a totally different concept which is, having children is a matter of commitment and reliability and they have their own rationale. Linking Words
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, the main purpose of getting married is to get children to take care of them. Linking Words
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, build a new generation that can influence positively in the society. Linking Words
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, when parents acquire children, educate them well, take care of their health, and keep them fit, they may become athletes or physicians or even politicians.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...