Home schooling belongs to the past and is unacceptable in the modern society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ? Use your own knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

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In the past,

home

schooling was quite a remarkable idea and it seemed like the most natural way of teaching, but in present times it has come under scrutiny. It is agreed that

Home

schooling is unacceptable in the modern age. By

analyzing

consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning

analysing

both the incapability of parents to teach contemporary education to their

child

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children

as well as no scientific approach using in

learning process

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the learning process

home

. Every parent may not capable of teaching his or her child at

home

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Even those mums and dads succeeded

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school

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could forget materials with the passage of time.

For example

, it is commonly understood that non professional teachers have break of study and practice.

Unfortunately they

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Unfortunately, they

may not enough

good

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better

at all subjects than before to teach

novice

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the novice

novices

a novice

Thus

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Thus, this

this

makes it clear why

home

schooling cannot be supported in

21st century

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the 21st century

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home

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Home

Parents, mentors and others

;

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;

moreover

, probably use own

method

in teaching apprentices

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Such

method

may not match with any scientific

method

that is

highly required for

job market

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the job market

or running businesses where child have to perform ultimately in

future

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the future

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For example

, adolescence need modern approaches to be taught effectively.

This

effectiveness

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effect

cannot be provided with offspring at own places.

That is

why the experience of professional teachers

are demanded

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is demanded

in today's world

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In summary, parents' hindrance to their children's learning process and non effective

method

operate to retard a

student

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student's

ability to learn new information

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Thus it

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Thus, it

is clear why the

idea of having

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idea of having a home

home

schooling cannot be supported. It is very detrimental

for

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student's future

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the student's future

a student's future

who will lead our world in

new and prosperous direction

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a new and prosperous direction

the new and prosperous direction

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Home schooling belongs to the past and is unacceptable in the modern society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ? Use your own knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Your opinion

Nowadays the difference between countries are becoming less evident because we see the same Tv shows, advertisements, fashion and follow the same brands

Films can have an effect on children's education and teach them many things. Do you think it is always a positive influence?

While travelling by metro train, your credit card slipped out of your pocket. You realized this only after reaching home. Write a letter to the concerned authorities and explain what happened.

Money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Governments could better spend this money on other things to benefit the nation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?