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Some people believe that universities should only accept students with high marks. Others believe that universities must accept student of all ages regardless their previous grades. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In
this
 knowledge-oriented society, some people argue that universities should only allow students who are
achieved
Suggestion
achieving
 an adequate score for higher study. While others think they must offer an opportunity to all pupils
equally
Suggestion
equal
 without considering their ages and marks. Both these schools of thought hold valid arguments which will be highlighted before concluding. On the one hand, individuals hold the belief that colleges should only accept students based on their marks.
First
,
this
 ensures the transparency and quality of the selection process in universities. Young individuals or those with excellent academic backgrounds are likely to suitable for the harsh academic environment since they are familiar with plethora studies and assignments.
Second
, in some specific occupations
such
 as a doctor, the dentist must recruit students with high concentration and reliable knowledge which assessed by passing the examinations with flying
colors
a flag that shows its nationality
colours
. On the flip side, some systems may fail to evaluate, so others maintain that universities should accept all applicants of all ages and those with less remarkable performances. From a fundamental human rights perspective, individuals can apply to any academic courses in higher education institutions as long as they
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 the entrance requirements. Apart from high scores, other qualities
such
 as teamwork spirit, interpersonal skills, organizing ability and
specialty
an expert who is devoted to one occupation or branch of learning
specialist
 in one field are of equal importance in
enrollment
 standards. From my own perspective, I side with the stance of the prior to a larger extent, believing that superior performance in academic study must be a crucial factor to evaluate the qualification of a student who can enter the university, but more all-round standards should be adopted in the future.
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