Most people prefer ready to eat food rather than homemade food now. Do you think it has more advantages or more disadvantages.

Now a days
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Nowadays
, because of hectic work schedules and a fast paced urban life, more and more people find it convenient to buy a pre cooked meal or ready to eat items available at a grocery store than follow an elaborate traditional cooking. Unfortunately,
this
trend has many disadvantages which far outweigh the advantages which
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First
and foremost, precooked meals are laden with unhealthy preservatives and saturated
fats which
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fats, which
a long term negative effects if eaten for a prolonged period of time. It is no surprise that many youngsters are falling prey to
lifetsyle
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
related diseases like obesity and other heart related ailments. Recently, a very well known noodles' manufacturer in India had to shut down its operations due to the fact that there was an objectionable lead content in its produce. Another problem that
this
trend of eating the ready to eat meals poses is that the local produce of fruits and vegetables of the country is often wasted which leads to an economic loss of the nation. It is a well documented fact that farmers of India are
commiting
perform an act, usually with a negative connotation
committing
suicides on a very large scale as they are unable to fetch a good return for their products.
This
further
makes the economy of the nation suffers especially for an
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> The only advantage of consuming the precooked meal is that it saves time in comparison to the traditional cooking methods.
Thus
from
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of
the above arguments it is
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evidently
ready to eat food has many disadvantages like deteriorating the health of consumers and spoiling the local produce of farmers, whereas the only advantage is that it saves time.

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