Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Over the years, there has been a great deal of discussion among the people who believed that

tourism industry

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the tourism industry

has negative effects on relationships of the people with different traditions and customs, where the others are advocates of

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opinion that not only it does not harm international understanding but, it strengthens mutual relationships between nations. Elaborating the

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point of view would clearly show how the advantages outweigh the weak points of

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important industry. Considering the very

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people in human history who had

traveled

traveled over or through; sometimes used as a combining term

travelled

to the other

neighboring

having a common boundary or edge; abutting; touching

neighbouring

countries, shows that the major reason for these kinds of trips was getting a better sight of their cultures without judging them based on their

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviour

. It still works in the modern tourism industry

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too, because

referring to so many researches it has been proved that

restrictions

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the restrictions

and limits of the host

country

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came after attractions of that place so it shows that respect never has replaced in

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area. The

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and most important evidence against the idea of tourism as a harmful field is its role in providing real feedback on the situation of a

country

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that, because of some circumstances is isolated in the world. We all have seen, at least once in our lives, that media showed a report that apart from its fake nature, it showed the reality completely reversed.

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, a

country

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like Iran with an acceptable level of safety an incredible amount of fascinating attractions is unable to be developed because of its political situation. The bad news is being pumped via media and illustrates a frightening image

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not quite true. In

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situation the visitors who came and see the reality

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and without intentional manipulation, not even help

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in

the creation of a constructive understanding but benefit the financial system of the

country

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too. All in all,

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nothing might be separated into black and white in

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specific field a close interaction between the people with various mindsets would lead to a brighter future not just for the host nation but

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for the other cultures that seek an effective relationship with the others.