Nowadays, international tourism is the biggest industry in the world. Unfortunately, international tourism creates tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Over the years, there has been a great deal of discussion among the people who believed that
tourism industry
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the tourism industry
has negative effects on relationships of the people with different traditions and customs, where the others are advocates of
this
opinion that not only it does not harm international understanding but, it strengthens mutual relationships between nations. Elaborating the
second
point of view would clearly show how the advantages outweigh the weak points of
this
important industry. Considering the very
first
people in human history who had
traveled
traveled over or through; sometimes used as a combining term
travelled
to the other
neighboring
having a common boundary or edge; abutting; touching
neighbouring
countries, shows that the major reason for these kinds of trips was getting a better sight of their cultures without judging them based on their
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
. It still works in the modern tourism industry
too because
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too, because
referring to so many researches it has been proved that
restrictions
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the restrictions
and limits of the host
country
came after attractions of that place so it shows that respect never has replaced in
this
area. The
second
and most important evidence against the idea of tourism as a harmful field is its role in providing real feedback on the situation of a
country
that, because of some circumstances is isolated in the world. We all have seen, at least once in our lives, that media showed a report that apart from its fake nature, it showed the reality completely reversed.
For example
, a
country
like Iran with an acceptable level of safety an incredible amount of fascinating attractions is unable to be developed because of its political situation. The bad news is being pumped via media and illustrates a frightening image
that is
not quite true. In
this
situation the visitors who came and see the reality
coverless
and without intentional manipulation, not even help
for
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in
the creation of a constructive understanding but benefit the financial system of the
country
too. All in all,
although
nothing might be separated into black and white in
this
specific field a close interaction between the people with various mindsets would lead to a brighter future not just for the host nation but
also
for the other cultures that seek an effective relationship with the others.

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