The tradition that the family gets together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts?
It seems that members of the family now could not gather together in meals.
This
essay will provide some explanation relate to this
trend, and it is effect on family bonding.
A few reasons can be given to explain why many people choose to eat out instead
of at home
. Firstly
, because of the busy working schedule, people cannot find time
to enjoy a meal with their families. Moreover
, the differences in work schedule do not allow people to spend time
eating meals with their family. For instance
, young people often tend to eat with friends or colleague because it suits their timetable. Second
, people usually want to save time
by eating out instead
of cooking at home
. In addition
, food
culture is becoming more diverse, and it attracts people. Thus
, there is a tendency for people to like going at restaurants rather than eat meals together at home
.
In terms of the drawbacks, if people do not eat meals together, this
leads to close-knit family will disappear. For example
, meal with family is a place where people share and talk together. It is help
members of the family to bond with each other. Suggestion
helping
Furthermore
, quality time
with families help children to shape their personalities during the formative years. Another disadvantage, when we eat out, we cannot see how they cook food
so, the food
is contaminated by bacteria. Nowadays, many people are getting poisoned due to food
is not ensuring quality, so people need to buy fresh food
, and own process food
their family.
In conclusion, people tend to like eating out rather than at home
. I believe that it creates a weak family bond, and this
trend has some drawback on family life.Submitted by hoangdieulinh1625 on
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