some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. others belive thet children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adaults. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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their children to fight until they achieve their dream. For that sake, some people encourage the idea of competition all the time, while, others prefer the idea of cooperation especially

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. Fighting of course is a perfect method should

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because it helps them not to surrender or give up their dreams. To be a good fighter and to win the battle

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your life is a perfect habit which, can be found only in those who trained from the

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day and knew the rules of the game. A large number of schools apply

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concept and really, they succeeded in making a generation who, is able to

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in different conditions. Those youngsters who trained from their early days are the best. They have the ability to

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under pressure, to smile, to challenge. According to the

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policy. In Japan, people who are responsible for teaching children

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method as it creates a selfish

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or share their ideas with others in order to draw the plan of

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. They found that most of these workers do not understand the meaning of cooperation and group

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. They only convinced that they should be the best for the sake of others.

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the principle of cooperation and assigning a certain kind of job to each child in order to complement each other. To conclude, one can say that both strategies are right parents can mix between the two

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in order to achieve the perfect goal

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their children. If they balance between the two ways

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that means they succeeded in manufacturing a perfect module.