Some people think that money is the best gift for teenagers. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

These days a few individuals consider that giving cash

money

as a present is good for a

teenagers

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teenager

while some people do not agree.

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essay will discuss that

why

to a great degree or by a great distance; very much ('right smart' is regional in the United States)

way

in my

opinion

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opinion, this

this

choice of gift is not appropriate.

This

notion will be examined through the analysis of false habits that children indulge in due to these presents. Regarding, the fraction of people which are in

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the opinion

of gifting cash to school goers think that

this

makes teenagers to become more responsible, as well as

independent

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independently

in society.

In particular

, these

gift

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gifts

often make youngsters to shop wisely and to have

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a

close check on

remaining balance

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the remaining balance

while purchasing daily amenities which

inturn

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in turn

, make them more careful

thus

refraining them from consumer thefts.

For instance

, children going to school spend diligently in in canteens and make sure to collect the remainder amount after that.

However

, if parents keep on pampering their child in

this

way, in the long run they may become

addictive

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addicted

to it and might tend to waste

money

on unwanted things.

On the other hand

, presenting youth with loose

money

on various occasions may

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inoculate

fuel drug habits in them. Specifically, children when given

heavy amount

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the heavy amount

of cash by their family and relatives often fall prey to wrong attributes. One particular instance of

this

comes from rich families

which have tradition

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which have a tradition

which have traditionally

which have traditionally traditionally

of giving

money

to their kids as compared to the poor families who have

meagre income

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the meagre income

to present

such

thing. It is often noticed that adolescent of former family can get easily trapped in false habits

such

as alcohol, human trafficking and prostitution etc.

rather

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Rather

than

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definite article

the

ones belonging to category of hand to mouth income.

Hence

, in my opinion gifting

money

can invite row of troubles for family members in

near future

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the near future

and

therefore

it should be criticised. In conclusion,

although

such

presents

makes

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make

youngsters more efficient and productive yet, I believe take undue advantage of

money

and can easily get brainwashed. Hopefully, in future more and more useful item like books etc.

should

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Should

be awarded to keep them on

right track

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the right track

.