Some people think that money is the best gift for teenagers. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your opinion
These days a few individuals consider that giving cash
money
as a present is good for a Use synonyms
teenagers
while some people do not agree. Suggestion
teenager
This
essay will discuss that Linking Words
why
in my to a great degree or by a great distance; very much ('right smart' is regional in the United States)
way
opinion
Accept comma addition
opinion, this
this
choice of gift is not appropriate. Linking Words
This
notion will be examined through the analysis of false habits that children indulge in due to these presents.
Regarding, the fraction of people which are in Linking Words
opinion
of gifting cash to school goers think that Suggestion
the opinion
this
makes teenagers to become more responsible, as well as Linking Words
independent
in society. Suggestion
independently
In particular
, these Linking Words
gift
often make youngsters to shop wisely and to have Suggestion
gifts
a a
close check on indefinite article, "an" is use before a vowel sound, "a" otherwise
a
remaining balance
while purchasing daily amenities which Suggestion
the remaining balance
inturn
, make them more careful Suggestion
in turn
thus
refraining them from consumer thefts. Linking Words
For instance
, children going to school spend diligently in in canteens and make sure to collect the remainder amount after that. Linking Words
However
, if parents keep on pampering their child in Linking Words
this
way, in the long run they may become Linking Words
addictive
to it and might tend to waste Suggestion
addicted
money
on unwanted things.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, presenting youth with loose Linking Words
money
on various occasions may Use synonyms
inculate
fuel drug habits in them. Specifically, children when given have as a part, be made up out of
include
inoculate
heavy amount
of cash by their family and relatives often fall prey to wrong attributes. One particular instance of Suggestion
the heavy amount
this
comes from rich families Linking Words
which have tradition
of giving Suggestion
which have a tradition
which have traditionally
which have traditionally traditionally
money
to their kids as compared to the poor families who have Use synonyms
meagre income
to present Suggestion
the meagre income
such
thing. It is often noticed that adolescent of former family can get easily trapped in false habits Linking Words
such
as alcohol, human trafficking and prostitution etc. Linking Words
rather
than Suggestion
Rather
the the
ones belonging to category of hand to mouth income.
definite article
the
Hence
, in my opinion gifting Linking Words
money
can invite row of troubles for family members in Use synonyms
near future
and Suggestion
the near future
therefore
it should be criticised.
In conclusion, Linking Words
although
Linking Words
such
presents Linking Words
makes
youngsters more efficient and productive yet, I believe take undue advantage of Suggestion
make
money
and can easily get brainwashed. Hopefully, in future more and more useful item like books etc.Use synonyms
should
be awarded to keep them on Suggestion
Should
right track
.Suggestion
the right track
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