All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

Paraphrase:As we can see,it states that in
environment
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the environment
an environment
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every car will
burns
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burn
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fossil
fuels
so
that
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we have to reduce the problem by using electric
cars
State opinion and main reasons:I agree because fossil
fuels
will damage
nature
by smoke released from
vehicles
and
also
decreasing of fossil
fuels
,and electric
cars
will not damage the
environment
MBP 1 Topic sentence: smoke release from
vehicles
Explain:In current world most
cars
are working with fossil
fuels
like
petrol
,
diesel
More over there is a decrease in
fuels
day by day. So we have stop using of
petrol
and
diesel
vehicles
it will damages
environment
by polluting the air. And it is very cost effective by using the
fuels
.these
fuels
will comes under from ground of earth But by using these
fuels
will reduce the earth efficiency. So we have to encourage by using electric
cars
.all most every companies are manufacturing
petrol
and
diesel
vehicles
example like BMW,AUDI,RENAULT etc MBP 2 Topic sentence: using electric
vehicles
Explain:by using these electric
vehicles
we can control the pollution in
nature
These electric
vehicles
depends upon electricity by using batteries to charge them.we see some companies
also
starting trying to manufacture the electric
cars
But they are still in trail, these
vehicles
cannot go long distances so that companies are modelizing the
vehicles
by improving its features so that they can release in the market .but by supplying the electric
vehicles
we can see the
nature
without pollution.these are less cost effective.and we can generate electricity from water
also
. we can conclude that using of
petrol
and
diesel
vehicles
will pollute the
environment
so that by promoting the electric
vehicles
we can reduce the cost and less harmful to
nature

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fossil fuels
  • emissions
  • air pollution
  • greenhouse gases
  • climate change
  • sustainable
  • renewable
  • electric vehicles
  • battery technology
  • charging infrastructure
  • range anxiety
  • government support
  • incentives
  • subsidies
  • renewable energy
  • environmental impact
  • energy efficiency
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