The first chart below shows the results of a survey which sampled a cross-section of 100,000 people asking if they traveled abroad and why they traveled for the period 1994-98. The second chart shows their destinations over the same period.
The chart above gives us information about the
number
of international visits
made by 100,000 Uk
residents
and their destinations for the period 1994-98.
It is quite evident from chart 1 that the number
of visits
abroad increased each year, soaring upto
28,828 in 1998. It can Correct your spelling
up to
also
be seen that the number
of Uk
travelers
plunged from 22,072 in 1994 to 21,610 in 1995. Change the spelling
travellers
However
, this
fall in numbers was temporary and in 1996 the trend resumed an upward trend. According to
chart 1, we can conclude that most of the visits
made by UK
travelers
were for holiday reasons. Some travels were for the purpose of meeting friends and relatives, Change the spelling
travellers
while
others were for the purpose of business as well.
It is clear by the second
bar graph that western Europe has been the major destination of
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for
UK
residents
from the period 1994-98, while
the least visited area is North America. There are other places where the
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apply
UK
residents
have made visits
over the years but the number
of visits
made is insignificant as compared to the visits
made in western Europe. Overall
, the number
of travels made abroad by 100,000 UK
residents
from 1994-98 increased each year, western
Europe being the Change preposition
with western
number
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