Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Road
safety has become a great concern for people with the rise of accidents and fatality those accidents cause every day. People have a varying opinion on how to make roads safe and I believe strict laws should be there to punish the driving offenders but a combination of other methods would bring better results. On the one hand, people seem to abide by a law or rule when they know that violation would bring severe retribution.
For instance
, in some Asian countries pedestrians used to cross the roads and when a more rigid penalty has been imposed, those very people started using the underpass. From
this
perspective, strict penalty and fine can certainly improve the
road
safety as people would be more cautious and afraid of the consequence of the violation of the
traffic
laws. As an outcome, it is a fact that, the sterner the punishment, the greater chances that people would follow the rules.
On the other hand
, there are already severe punishments for driving offenders, including ceasing the driving license, monetary fines and imprisonments. Despite
this
, the number of
road
accidents is increasing every year.
This
is why I believe that only punishment cannot ensure the
road
security and safety. A combination of other initiatives is
also
required.
First
, we need to aware people about the devastating consequences
traffic
rule violations can bring to our lives.
Second
, the requirements for passing the driving test should be standardised and made more practical, especially in developing countries where people can use advantages of the corruption. It is often noticed that many young people are given driving license without scrutinising their experience and skills.
This
should be completely avoided and after a certain period, each driver should be retested.
Third
, unfit vehicles should not be allowed to run on the roads as these cars cause more
accidents according
Accept comma addition
accidents, according
to the recent
Road
Transport Authority report.
Finally
, the
traffic
system of a country should be modernised and more surveillance cameras and speed test cameras should be there. To conclude, punishment to
traffic
rule violators is a good way to make the
road
safer, but the combination of other steps would bring more desired results
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • deterrent
  • repeat offenses
  • infrastructure improvements
  • public awareness campaigns
  • reckless driving
  • traffic management technologies
  • intelligent traffic lights
  • speed cameras
  • public transportation
  • minimize
  • enhance safety
  • allocate funds
  • road signs
  • road safety
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