Some people think that foreign visitors should be charged more than local when they visit cultural and tourist attractions in a country. To what extent do you agree with this view?

there

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There

is no doubt that these days there a lot of foreign visitors and local go to

tourist

locations in the

country

. The question is should the foreign pay more to visit or not?, in

this

essay

im

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I'm

going to discuss my view and draw my personal conclusion. In terms of advantages they will make good money to the government.

the

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The

main reason to support

this

claim is that in

report

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the report

shows that in the

tourist

places in the

uk

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UK

76 percent of the people are

visitor

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visiting

from

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

country

. So,

this

will

benfit

financial assistance in time of need

benefit

the

buget

a sum of money allocated for a particular purpose

budget

of the

govenment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

. In other word, people believe it is

good idea

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a good idea

to charge the

fotrign

more.

for

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For

example, from every foreign 25 percent extra

However

.

there

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There

will be

disadvantages

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disadvantaged

.

Firstly

,

vistiors

someone who visits

visitor

number will reduce.

because

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Because

of the high value to visit in the

country

.

in

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In

other word, there will be

huge drop

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a huge drop

huge drops

in people who travel from other

country

.

Secondly

, foreign will be visiting another

country

who are less in the price.

This

is because the extra charge on

tourist

attrations

the force by which one object attracts another

attractions

. So foreign will start to travel to another culture.

Also

the

conutry

a politically organized body of people under a single government

country

will lose

it

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

funding because most money

govenment

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governments

government

earn is from the

tourist

. So people think is a bad thing to do. In conclusion,

although

there are positive side and negative side on both views.

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

believe

that is

country

shouldn't take more money from foreign people. And government must ensure steps are taken to prevent

this

phenemnon

any state or process known through the senses rather than by intuition or reasoning

phenomenon

from deteriorating

futur

to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)

further