You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The graph demonstrates information about the trend of society (in percentage) in three different countries: the
USA
, Sweden
, and Japan
. The period which happens in the study had been staring in 1940 and will finish in 2040. The range of age of this
research will be over 65 years
old. Over the years
, Japan
shows a sharp increase and in 2040, the increment inhabitation will be between 25% and 30%. Regarding Sweden
and Japan
, the widening will be between 20% and 25%.
First of all, in 1940, those countries show the same range of the state, between 5% and 10%. But, over the years
Japan
shows a decrease of over 5% between the middle of 1940 and 2000. At the same time, the USA
and Sweden
demonstrate an expansive, almost double the percentage of Japan
and the peak of these countries occur at the beginning of the 1980s.
Then
in 2000, Japan
shows a gradual boost and over the years
, specifically between 2020 and 2040, it happens a rapid rise. In other words
, Japanese society surpasses other nations in 20 years
. In addition
, American society stabilizes the amount between 20 years
, but over these years
, it demonstrates a development. Finally
, in the same period of level off of the USA
, Sweden
presents a peak of 20% and before the enlarges in the amount the people, occur 2 situations at the same time: a decrease and an increase in community USA
and Sweden
, respectively.Submitted by yasminbitar0 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words usa, sweden, japan, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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