The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph demonstrates information about the trend of society (in percentage) in three different countries: the
USA
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Sweden
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Japan
. The period which happens in the study had been staring in 1940 and will finish in 2040. The range of age of Use synonyms
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research will be over 65 Linking Words
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old. Over the Use synonyms
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Japan
shows a sharp increase and in 2040, the increment inhabitation will be between 25% and 30%. Regarding Use synonyms
Sweden
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Japan
, the widening will be between 20% and 25%.
First of all, in 1940, those countries show the same range of the state, between 5% and 10%. But, over the Use synonyms
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Japan
shows a decrease of over 5% between the middle of 1940 and 2000. At the same time, the Use synonyms
USA
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Sweden
demonstrate an expansive, almost double the percentage of Use synonyms
Japan
and the peak of these countries occur at the beginning of the 1980s.
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in 2000, Linking Words
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shows a gradual boost and over the Use synonyms
years
, specifically between 2020 and 2040, it happens a rapid rise. Use synonyms
In other words
, Japanese society surpasses other nations in 20 Linking Words
years
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In addition
, American society stabilizes the amount between 20 Linking Words
years
, but over these Use synonyms
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, it demonstrates a development. Use synonyms
Finally
, in the same period of level off of the Linking Words
USA
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Sweden
presents a peak of 20% and before the enlarges in the amount the people, occur 2 situations at the same time: a decrease and an increase in community Use synonyms
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