Compare the advantage and disadvantage of two of media for communicating information such as books and television.

In
this
era, technology
play
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plays
a crucial role in
communication
which provide a huge number of
mode
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modes
of
communication
. Even though, all
kind
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kinds
of channels which are
using
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used
for spreading
communication
,
donot
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do not
effective. I believe that books and
television
are the best source of
communication
. To commence with, there are some merits of these two ways of
communication
. The most prominent benefit of the book is that
hte
definite article
the
books are the prime source of knowledge from ancient till now because the books enhance the knowledge of individuals regarding the different cultures and regions.
As a result
, the people become interlinked with
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
people and the insight can be found by people in themselves. Another advantage of
television
is that the
television
is
more powerful
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most powerful
media for communicating with
otherone
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other one
' s because by
this
method, the government
convey
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conveys
the latest message to mass population with an easy way.
Therefore
, the individual's become updated by using it regarding daily news.
On the other hand
, the demerits cannot be
underlooked
coordinate in such a way that all parts work together effectively
interlocked
of these two methods of
communication
.
Firstly
, the books is the time consuming process because the book
take
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takes
a lot of time for reading and people
donot
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do not
have enough time due to their hectic schedule.
Hence
, the mortals less prefer to the books.
Secondly
, sometime the
news which
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news, which
are broadcasting
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is broadcast
is broadcasting
is broadcasted
will be broadcast
on
television
, mislead to the community because some of news are not
trustworthy which
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trustworthy, which
leads to violence in the community. In conclusion,
although
there are a couple of
advantage
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advantages
of the books as well as
television
, the disadvantage of these both of
communication
cannot be ignored.
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