Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nation’s history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by news ones. How important is it to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way of progress?

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Nations take
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Nations to take
pride in their
history
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and protect their monuments to
safegaurd
make safe
safeguard
their culture
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, there is a segment of the population who believe in change and want to build new monuments.
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essay discusses the importance of historic monuments and the role it plays in development. A
countries
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country's
countries'
culture,
cusine
the practice or manner of preparing food or the food so prepared
cuisine
cuisines
and architecture
outlines
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its personality and adds flavour to its unique identity. Old monuments are very symbolic to a country’s character and
history
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.The pyramids of Giza in
Egypt
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Egypt, for
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, were built in 2000 BC
,
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way before bronze era. The structure simply marvels us and its method
contruction
the act of constructing something
construction
still
a
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an
unknown to mankind.
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larger than life structure
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carries with it stories of ancient times and beliefs of the Egyptians. These pyramids have lasted the test of time and stood for centuries, and cannot be replaced.
Concious
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destruction of these structures will erase the
history
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of
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country. There are many
such
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buildings and monuments across the globe which amazes mankind. Places like the
taj
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Taj
Mahal in India, statue of liberty, the Great wall of china attracts a lot of travellers from across the globe for their beauty, magnitude and
history
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.Tourism is the largest
contributer
someone who contributes (or promises to contribute) a sum of money
contributor
contribute
contributes
to a country’s economy and these structures are contributing to their
countries
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countries'
country's
development.
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example country
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example, country
like Thailand have strong laws to
proctect
shield from danger, injury, destruction, or damage
protect
their monuments and have open their doors to tourists across the globe to experience their
history
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and culture. Over time all structures go through wear and tear and its,
goverments
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government's
responsibility to ensure
restotration
the act of restoring something or someone to a satisfactory state
restoration
and upkeep of these structures.
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the onus of citizens to take pride in these
strutures
a thing constructed; a complex entity constructed of many parts
structures
and not damage or malign them.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural heritage
  • Tangible connections
  • Insight
  • Historic buildings
  • Architectural significance
  • Environmental impact
  • Resource consumption
  • Community identity
  • Character
  • Distinct
  • Preservation
  • Revenue
  • Tourists
  • Demolishing
  • Constructing
  • Replicated
  • Unique styles
  • Local businesses
  • Significant revenue
  • Historical value
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