Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nation’s history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by news ones. How important is it to maintain old buildings? Should history stand in the way of progress?

Nations take

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Nations to take

pride in their

history

and protect their monuments to

safegaurd

make safe

safeguard

their culture

.

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However

, there is a segment of the population who believe in change and want to build new monuments.

This

essay discusses the importance of historic monuments and the role it plays in development. A

countries

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country's

countries'

culture,

cusine

the practice or manner of preparing food or the food so prepared

cuisine

cuisines

and architecture

outlines

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outline

its personality and adds flavour to its unique identity. Old monuments are very symbolic to a country’s character and

history

.The pyramids of Giza in

Egypt

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Egypt, for

for example

, were built in 2000 BC

,

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way before bronze era. The structure simply marvels us and its method

contruction

the act of constructing something

construction

still

a

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an

unknown to mankind.

This

larger than life structure

also

carries with it stories of ancient times and beliefs of the Egyptians. These pyramids have lasted the test of time and stood for centuries, and cannot be replaced.

Concious

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Conscious

Concourse

destruction of these structures will erase the

history

of

this

country. There are many

such

buildings and monuments across the globe which amazes mankind. Places like the

taj

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Taj

Mahal in India, statue of liberty, the Great wall of china attracts a lot of travellers from across the globe for their beauty, magnitude and

history

.Tourism is the largest

contributer

someone who contributes (or promises to contribute) a sum of money

contributor

contribute

contributes

to a country’s economy and these structures are contributing to their

countries

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countries'

country's

development.

For

example country

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example, country

like Thailand have strong laws to

proctect

shield from danger, injury, destruction, or damage

protect

their monuments and have open their doors to tourists across the globe to experience their

history

and culture. Over time all structures go through wear and tear and its,

goverments

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government's

responsibility to ensure

restotration

the act of restoring something or someone to a satisfactory state

restoration

and upkeep of these structures.

Its

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It's

also

the onus of citizens to take pride in these

strutures

a thing constructed; a complex entity constructed of many parts

structures

and not damage or malign them.