Some people claim tobacco has brought social problems and smoking should be banned. To extend do you agree or disagree?

Few individuals assume that utilizing tobacco leads to tons of social problem

also

smoking must be prohibited. There is apprehension about

this

dilemma and I am inclined to believe that cigarette smoking must be banned. Tobacco is popular with

everyone especially

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everyone, especially

teenagers at an early age people use tobacco because of peer pressure and by smoking, they boast

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confidently

and it helps them feel

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relaxed

and full because of its side effects.

However

, generation nowadays are engaged in many crimes like party drugs,

cyberbullying

and worst killing

innocent human being

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an innocent human being

innocent human beings

,

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to

that are

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that, are

rising number of

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students

dropping out

from

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of

school for the reason that they spend their money to buy cigarettes and attending parties joining gangs and involved in riots

instead

of attending school and

also

growing numbers of individual with respiratory problem and most who are diagnosed to have

this

problem are those who are smokers.

Consequently

, by the above reason,

this

will give drawback

effect

for the user and none user and as far as I am

concerned I

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concerned, I

barely agree that

this

is one of the reasons that sum up and leads to social problems. In the

first

place, people who are smokers may develop complications that affect their lungs and not just

them but

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them, but

also

those who are exposed and inhaled the chemicals.

Second

, those who are attending parties, members of the gang are mostly involved in troubles and crimes.

Lastly

, those who preferred to spend money and waste time buying all of

this

instead

of saving and studying for the future are mostly affected. In contrary to that tobacco

also

has its positive

effect according

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effect, according

to the study it can alleviate some symptoms of the disease since there is

substance

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a substance

contained

by

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in

the plan that has a relaxing

effect

. In conclusion, the adverse

effect

of

this

plant may decrease by moderate intake and proper use with self-limitation and awareness by rampant advertisement and reminders of its awful

effect

.

Furthermore

, providing rules and qualifications before selling cigarettes to minors like age limitation by providing identification cards and increasing the price of the product. Knowledge and awareness is the key for better result.