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An increasing trend nowadays is for young adults to play computer games. Some people say this is a negative development. Discuss and give your opinion.

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Computer games are very much popular in children's nowadays. Some people believe
this
 is a negative development. I partially agree with these people as some games may affect child's mental
growth but
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growth, but
on the other
hand some games
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hand, some games
 are useful in developing children's ability to think. One of the most vital disadvantages of gaming is that it takes too much of adults time. Games these days are so
lengthy
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long
 and difficult to complete and adults
consumes
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consume
 too much time in order to finish these. The other major drawbacks of
gamming
the act of playing for stakes in the hope of winning (including the payment of a price for a chance to win a prize)
gaming
farming
jamming
 is it has a significant impact
of
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on
ones
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one's
 health. Violent games are very popular among kids and it has a negative consequence as kids
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
 changed and they may become violent. Harvard university
last
year research
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year, research
 paper shows that adults playing shooting or violent games are more prone to
such
 activities.
However
, there are so many benefits of gaming
aswell
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as well
. It helps children's to think solution of many different problems. There are many arcade games which demand creativity to finish. While playing those
games kids
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games, kids
 actually think how to cope with
this
 challenge and it sharpens their brain and is helpful for
childs
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child
children
children's
child's
 development. Oxford university students did an experiment with people who play games and who don't. Their findings show that
ones
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one
 who used to play games in their childhood are
more smarter
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smarter
 and sharp in thinking as compared to others. To conclude, there is a negative consequence of
gamming
the act of playing for stakes in the hope of winning (including the payment of a price for a chance to win a prize)
gaming
 as it takes too much time and
also
 have an impact on one's growth. In my
opinion if
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opinion, if
 nonviolent and creative games
been
the state or fact of existing
being
 played by kids it helps them to be more creative and think out of
box solutions
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the box solutions
 for problems.

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