Studies suggest that the rise in the consumption of junk foods is the major cause of obesity. Some people argue that this problem can be tackled to a great extent by increasing the price of food items. Do you agree or disagree?

It is thought by many that the rising cause of obesity is due to eating fast

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food but others

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food, but others

think that increasing fatness problems can be resolved by changing the actual

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of the

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items. In my opinion, I agree with the idea of inflating the cost of

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commodities to deal with corpulence and the supporting points will be discussed in the subsequent paragraphs.

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with, the affordability of junk

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is a major concern which is leading to obesity.

Firstly

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, fast

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in the markets is now available at very cheap charges which is easily accessible by the teenagers and adults. Masses prefer to eat

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food

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in the markets

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of eating home made

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. The only solution to deal with

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is to increase the

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of items twice to the actual

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.

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, if Burger is available at $3,

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increasing in quantity or value

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its

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to $5 will think people to invest

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this bucks

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these bucks

this buck

in the healthy

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of buying only burger.

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, artificial sweeteners in junk

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are

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a concern. Not only, the consumption of fast

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products is the only reason to increase the

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price but

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price, but

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there is some

food

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which has some artificial sweeteners in soaring amount.

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type of

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helps in accumulating excess fat in the

liver which

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liver, which

in later stages lead to

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marked by a tendency to find and call attention to errors and flaws

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illness. Inflating the amount of these products will lead to less consumption.

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, it has been found that children who are eating junk

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which has artificial sweeteners are obese at the age of 15. In conclusion, to tackle with

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this, high prices

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high prices, this

can be an effective way to discourage the consumption of fast foods. In fact, if countries put

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idea into practice, there will be fewer fat people around.