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Many Governments think that the economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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The progress of a state is often measured by the economic
growth
,
therefore
 many governments focus more on their economic progress rather than other aspects.
However
, some people have a contrasting view as they believe that political stability, security, social
condition
 and education are equally important for the advancement of a nation.      On the one hand, many federations pay more attention to economic development than other aspects of life as they believe that economic
growth
 plays an important role in the development of a nation. When a country's economy develops, it ensures business ventures, new job opportunities and the authorised institutions can collect more funds through taxes.
This
 fund could be used for the improvement of other sectors
such
 as education, public infrastructures and military services.  
On the other hand
, even though economic
growth
 plays an essential part, governments must ensure a better living standard and green environment. The economic
condition
 of a country will not grow without the support of a secure social
condition
, better political
condition
 and advanced educational system. Investors will not place their investment in countries that have an insecure governings
such
 as Afganistan or Iraq. And
then
, without the existence of educated and skilled workers, it will be difficult for a country to improve their industrial and trade activities.
Therefore
, the
growth
 of the economic sectors should be aligned with other important sectors. In conclusion, it is undeniable that wage boosting plays plethora role in the development of a nation.
However
, I personally believe that
besides
 economic progress, better education, social welfare, security and political stability are equally important for the sustainable emerging society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • standard of living
  • sustainable development
  • social equality
  • environmental degradation
  • cultural heritage
  • technological innovation
  • wealth disparity
  • human development index
  • holistic approach
  • quality of life
  • economic prosperity
  • healthcare system
  • education system
  • cultural diversity
  • policy decisions
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