Some people believe that young people benefit from working while studying at school or university. Others think that young people will achieve more by focussing on their studies. Discuss both of the view points and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. days?

Nowadays, some people believe that young people will

benefit

from working while studying. Meanwhile, the others think that the youth will achieve more by focusing on their studying rather than get a part

time

job

. In these days, with the modern technology, people can

study

anywhere anytime, it is no doubt that they still have good marks even when doing part

time

jobs if they can manage their

time

well. I agree that young people

benefit

from working while studying at school or

university

.

Firstly

, when students focussing on their studies, they can understand all the knowledge and get a high score at school.

This

score is very important for them to achieve excellent or good results so as not to stay in the same grade. Especially in grade twelve, the marks will decide if you can come to

university

or not.And in

university

, which is a very important place for

student

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students

a student

to accumulate knowledge one

last

time

before going to

work

for real, they must need extra attention to studying

Secondly

, when they focus on their studies more than the others who

work

part

time

jobs, when getting a new

job

, because of the large knowledge they earn to the long studying pass, they can get a high

job

more than people who

work

while

study

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studying

. That can lead them to get

higher and higher

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a higher and higher job

higher and higher jobs

job

and even become the boss, when people spend their younger days both working and studying

can not

can not

cannot

get that much. It is true that young people will achieve a

lots

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lot

by focussing on their studies, but in some cases the youth who working while studying still get the same success as the youth who focussing on their studying.

That is

because they know how to arrange

time

and have the right way to

study

. By doing part-

time

job

, it can help them gain more experience that can help their

job

in the future.

Moreover

, students can learn how to manage their

money

in the right way, they will

also

understand the value of

money

.

In addition

, they can

also

earn

money

through the

work

they do, it can be useful for their studying, some students even earn extra pocket

money

or saving it for the future

.

Accept space

.

To conclude, focussing on studies is really important, and it seems like to get good marks, students can just focus studying and don’t need to

work

. But nowadays, with the modern technology, pupil can reduce their

study

time

a lot and can still do jobs for more

benefit

. I do agree that young people

benefit

from working while studying at school or

university

.