Nowadays, some people believe that young people will
benefit
from working while studying. Meanwhile, the others think that the youth will achieve more by focusing on their studying rather than get a part
time
job
. In these days, with the modern technology, people can
study
anywhere anytime, it is no doubt that they still have good marks even when doing part
time
jobs if they can manage their
time
well. I agree that young people
benefit
from working while studying at school or
university
.
Firstly
, when students focussing on their studies, they can understand all the knowledge and get a high score at school.
This
score is very important for them to achieve excellent or good results so as not to stay in the same grade. Especially in grade twelve, the marks will decide if you can come to
university
or not.And in
university
, which is a very important place for
to accumulate knowledge one
last
time
before going to
work
for real, they must need extra attention to studying
Secondly
, when they focus on their studies more than the others who
work
part
time
jobs, when getting a new
job
, because of the large knowledge they earn to the long studying pass, they can get a high
job
more than people who
work
while
. That can lead them to get
higher and higher Suggestion
a higher and higher job
higher and higher jobs
job
and even become the boss, when people spend their younger days both working and studying
get that much.
It is true that young people will achieve a
by focussing on their studies, but in some cases the youth who working while studying still get the same success as the youth who focussing on their studying.
That is
because they know how to arrange
time
and have the right way to
study
. By doing part-
time
job
, it can help them gain more experience that can help their
job
in the future.
Moreover
, students can learn how to manage their
money
in the right way, they will
also
understand the value of
money
.
In addition
, they can
also
earn
money
through the
work
they do, it can be useful for their studying, some students even earn extra pocket
money
or saving it for the future
To conclude, focussing on studies is really important, and it seems like to get good marks, students can just focus studying and don’t need to
work
. But nowadays, with the modern technology, pupil can reduce their
study
time
a lot and can still do jobs for more
benefit
. I do agree that young people
benefit
from working while studying at school or
university
.