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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antartica. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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Over the
last
 few years, peoples are much interested to go
on
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to
 a tourist destination
that is
 inhabitant or hostile. They want to explore new destinations that have ever been seen by anyone.
such
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Such
 type of expeditions has both advantages and disadvantages and we will discuss both the aspects of my essay. Today's more and more tourists opt for unusual destinations. Adventure tourism
increasingly
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increase
increasing
 leaps and bounds. It is due to the thrill or the
adrenalin
a catecholamine secreted by the adrenal medulla in response to stress (trade name Adrenalin); stimulates autonomic nerve action
adrenaline
 they feel increased, has raised interest in the people. It may be going on trekking on a mountain or explore the desert area, everything
that is
 challenging attract the people. The main benefit of
this
 type of expeditions is to test one's ability to cope up with the harsh conditions of life. New destinations came to
in
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to
 light by the effort of these peoples. Columbus discovered America or Hillary victory on Mount Everest is the result of these efforts. Though adventure tourism calms the desire of thrill or
adventure but
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adventure, but
 is dangerous
also
. Many tourists have died in Everest expeditions and the administration
have
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has
 to spend a good amount of money to rescue them. Going to unknown places, or
doing rafting
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raft
 in a vibrant river is always a risky operation. So visiting unusual places for the tourist is risky as well as adventurous. Before going to
such
 places one has to train yourself to deal with all the situations. It is always avoidable for the very young or old people
to go
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go
 to
such
 destinations. Safety should be
first
 as we don't know what has to face on unexplored tourist destinations.
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