Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good memebers of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

Having good members of
society
is what leads to a functional and well structured country, for
this
reason it is important to put an effort in the education of children in that direction, but who is supposed to do so? Some people think that
this
role has to be taken by the family, but I strongly believe that the
school
has to fulfil
this
mission. In
this
essay I will report reasons sustaining my statement.
First
of all, when kids start
school
, they will meet a social environment where rules are crucial to live in. Every child has to follow the same rules as the others. More importantly, children in
school
are all equal and they will be judged in the same way. In
this
feature
school
represents better the social environment that children are going to meet in their adulthood.
Secondly
, children in schools have just one job: achieving results. Maybe it is harsh to put it
this
way, but
this
is
also
what they will have to do in the
society
,
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whether you have to demonstrate your ability in the job, or you have to gain the trust of people, you have to show your results.
On the other hand
, it is important to state that family is the
first
type of
society
that a child met: there are different people, of different ages that work together in order to build and maintain the wellness of the family. To do so it is important that every family member respects given rules, but the problem is that every family has its rules, that derived from its cultural heritage, its history and its religion. My point is that, even if nobody can undervalue the role of the family to teach children how to be good people, the formation of children as good members of
society
has to be given to the
school
, in order to pass by the same rules to all members and to build a functional and structured
society
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Societal norms
  • Role models
  • Foundation
  • Family values
  • Ethics
  • Habits
  • Responsibilities
  • Structured environment
  • Diversity
  • Cooperation
  • Respect
  • Civic education
  • Social skills
  • Integration
  • Guidance
  • Harmonious cooperation
  • Optimizes
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