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When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to tru and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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There is a natural tendency for people's
culture
 to be threatened by technological advancement as a country develops. In my opinion, I strongly disagree that developments in technology should be allowed to replace people's
cult
ure.
Suggestion
the people's culture
Firstly
,
culture
 is a strong tool on fostering
pe
Suggestion
in
for
ace and unity in a country.
Culture
 is expressed through art, languages and traditional skills
such
 as: pottery making, painting, local wrestling and dance. When these practices are shared among a group of people, it strengthens the bond and oneness that exist between them.
Secondly
, it is of utmost benefit that our ways of life and traditional skills are passed down to our children for the preservation of our history.
For example
, in my home town, there are yearly festivals that mark significant moments in our history during which there are many cultural works on display in the form of art, dance and food. These festivals continue to be celebrated generations after generations e
nsuring that
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generations, ensuring
such
 priceless moments are never forgotten.
On the contrary
, it might be posited by some, that
culture
 repels the advancement of technology. They may argue that the old methods do not allow new ideas thrive and
hence
 get in the way of progress.
This
 is rather far fetched, as countries with the best technological advancements are known to have the richest c
ultural her
Suggestion
the rich
itage
such
 as China, France and Germany. In summary, I strongly beleive that
efforts
accept as true; take to be true
believe
 should be made to preserve peoples
culture
 in the presence of technological advancements, due to its numerous benefits and despite the argument to the contrary.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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