Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think that advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is thought by some people that moving major industries and companies to r

eigional

characteristic of a region

regional

areas far from main

city

Use synonyms

c

enter

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

would be b

enificial.

promoting or enhancing well-being

beneficial

In my opinion, I consider that relocating them can bring more advantages compare to any problems it might bring. Despite of the disadvantages below, I b

elive

accept as true; take to be true

believe

that moving the big industries and companies to regional areas can be very b

enificial

promoting or enhancing well-being

beneficial

for people living in cities.

Firstly

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, There will be less p

olution

undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities

pollution

polluting

in

c

Use synonyms

ity

Suggestion

the city

cities

.

Accept space

.

For instance

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, industries produce a

lot

Suggestion

a lot

of s

mokes which

Accept comma addition

smokes, which

makes the air u

nbreathable

Suggestion

and very polluted. It can be s

eriosly

in a serious manner

seriously

dangerous for people to breath that kind of air.

Secondly

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, it will allow the factories to b

uilt

Suggestion

build

on much vast area compare to urban c

enters.

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centres

l

arge

Suggestion

Large

Industries require a

lot

Suggestion

a lot

of land which is difficult to manage in populated cities.

However

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,

t

Accept space

,

hat land c

an be utilize

Suggestion

can be utilized

in building residential properties as there is always s

horatge

Suggestion

a shortage

shortage

of housing in main

city

Use synonyms

c

enters.

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centres

Admittedly, There are minor drawbacks of moving the industries far from urban c

enters.

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centres

Employees of the industries will have to travel long routes daily.A significant amount of their day time will be wasted in travelling.Another problem would be i

ncrease

Suggestion

an increase

in the t

ransporation

a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods

transportation

cost. More fuel will be required for bringing the goods from i

ndustries

Suggestion

the industries

to the main

city

Use synonyms

and i

t's

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

r

etailors.

a merchant who sells goods at retail

retailers

In conclusion to that, The b

enifits

financial assistance in time of need

benefits

of moving industries to regional areas greatly outweighs any t

ransportaion

a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods

transportation

cost and long travelling.