Some people think it is more important to spend time in developing a successful career while others think it is more important to spend time with friends and family. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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, time has a huge influence on people’s lives virtually all around the world. Considering

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scenario, some people believe that utilising major duration

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of

the construction of

bright future

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a bright future

is more important

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however others

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however, others

claim that spend it with kith and kin is very significant.

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essay will discuss both the views and examine on

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the above argument

before reaching to any staunch conclusion. Predominantly,

career

achievement is of great benefit to successfully

development

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develop

developed

in the form of financial matters.

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may mean that thriving in a job opportunity might give rise to better social and personal welfare, hopefully leading to improvement in quality of life. A valid illustration of

this

can be in the case of some film industry personalities

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They come from poor family

background but

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background, but

they put their effort for

career

enhancement and now become

successful Film Star

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a successful Film Star

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Therefore

, it is clearly evident that

career

progression is of paramount importance in people’s life.Notably, pursing

career

has rewards which go beyond the material considerations. It seems quite tenable that job satisfaction may afford spiritual enrichment,

thus

fostering the sense of self-confidence and self-assurance. With regards to the above argument, placing more emphasis on the effective communication with families and friends is a key illustration of rational thinking. It seems quite justifiable that

such

a communication is essential for absorbing ground rules and codes of

conducts

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conduct

for social behaviour and building of family structure, arguably leading to an absence of emotional and social problems, particularly for younger members of

family

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the family

. Nobody can deny the tremendous benefits of continuous supervision of parents for their children, ensuring

well-behaved environment

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a well-behaved environment

which might be provided for children to be well-brought up. Equally, most people would derive benefits from their families and friends in terms of

career

progression and financial matters. All

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things

considered, one can conclude that both sides of

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the debate

are not necessarily mutually exclusive. From my point of view, sensible figures would share fairly their time with both surrounding people and

career

advancement.