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Task 2: The Quality of life in large cities is decreasing. What could be the reasons behind this. What measures can be taken to solve this problem?

#quality #life #cities #measures
With the industrialization, it is inevitable that more people will relate from rural regions to urban cities in order to seek for
better living
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a better living environment
environment
 and better opportunities in careers.
Therefore
,  the large
migration
 will contribute
in
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to
worsening living
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the worsening living environment
environment
 for local residents due to many factors. 
Migration
 from rural to urban area leads to
population
 growth in large cities. High
population
 density will lead to people's more demand of food, housing and entertainment.
However
, limited
resources supplies and
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resources, supplies and
 services in cities can not meet the residents’ basic needs.
Over-crowded
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Overcrowded
 people in cities,
specially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
 in
inner city area
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inner city areas
the inner city area
, will contribute poor living
housing hygiene
Accept comma addition
housing, hygiene
,  high unemployed rate and crime rates.  
In addition
, they
also results
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also result
have also resulted
 in
traffic
 congestion in cities due to increase in
transport
 vehicles, especially in private cars.
Last
 but not the least, increasing
migration
also
 results in environmental pollution in the regions. More garbages and wastes will produced by over
population
 and industrialization. More exhausted toxic gases will be emitted
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
atmosphere
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the atmosphere
 by increased public transportation. All these will contribute in
worse living
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a worse living environment
the worse living environment
environment
 for local residents in large cities.  With the increasing inevitable
migration
 worldwide, proper methods should be carried out by local governments in order to maintain high quality of urban lifestyle.
Firstly
, it is necessary for governments to increase 
budget
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budgets
 in housing and facilities construction to meet the increasing demand of climbing
population
. More affordable housing will provide a healthy living
environment
 for residents. The development of
cites
a large and densely populated urban area; may include several independent administrative districts
cities
,
such
 as building new houses and facilities and maintaining the building
also
 create jobs in
work force
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the work force
. With proper employment rate, the crime rate might be reduced.
In addition
, investing money in public
transport
 system improvement will relieve the
traffic
 congestions and attract more residents to use
pubic
not private; open to or concerning the people as a whole
public
transport
 rather than driving their own cars.
Therefore
, the number of private cars will reduce on the road and
traffic
 congestion will be relieved.  As stated above, the quality of life in large cites is affected by increasing
migration
 from rural area to urban cities. The factors which lead to worsen living
environment
 in cities include high density
population
, dirty
living hygiene
Accept comma addition
living, hygiene
,  
traffic
 congestion and increasing crime rates.
Therefore
, in order to maintain the inner city living
environment
, city governments should increase
budget
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the budget
 in housing and facilities construction and improvement of public
transport
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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