Many People believe that the increased presence of violence in film and Television these days is responsible for the rising incidents of violent crime among youths in society. They argue that government have a duty to control the media so as to reduce this phenomenon. Do you agree with this argument?

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Youth
violence
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is a problem that many people blame on the media, which they believe should be supervised by the
government
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. I disagree with
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idea and believe that society itself should fix
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problem. In today's world young people are influenced by many things, like television, films, and websites. It is
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unreasonable to accuse only movies of increasing
violence
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.
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, today's youth come across all human
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
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behaviour
equally,
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as
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and kindness and greed and generosity. They can witness these things in one news broadcast just as much as they can in an action movie.
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, blaming the entertainment industry is not only unfair, but it is
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wrong because it ignores the root cause of these
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
. To suggest that the
government
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should control
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,
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, is to avoid taking responsibility for ourselves. Indeed, a
government
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should not act as parents to its citizens. It exists to ensure society can thrive, not to tell people what to do.
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, parents can and must control what their children see online, in movies, or any other resource.
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, parents must decide whether they want their children to watch horror movies; it is not a
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government's
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government
job to ban a studio from making it. Once a
government
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controls one sphere, it will be free to act in all areas of our lives because negative influences are everywhere and have always been so. Not only will
government
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actions not
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actions, not
stop
violence
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, but they will
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likely increase it as people fight for their freedom. In conclusion,
violence
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can be triggered in many ways, including, but not limited to media influence. The
government
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should
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not be allowed to restrict what
entertainment companies
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the entertainment companies
produce because they will
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have to spread their control to all areas of society.
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