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Some people think that women are generally more peaceful than men as their characters are naturally more nurturing than aggressive. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Every individual is born with different characters. Some are polite, some short tempered, some kind. Some people feel that women are more peaceful than men as their characters are more nurturing than aggressive. I completely agree to the fact. When a child
borns
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, he is born with a mix of characters and with growing age some characters take dominance while others are suppressed. Men and women are two different genders with opposing characteristics, but complementing each other. Women are designed with utmost delicacy. The aspects of love, patience, care, affection, emotion are filled
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 them. They are naturally more caring than men. They are considered best in taking care of a child for their qualities of nurturing.
On the other hand
, men are more tough, frank, aggressive giving them an appealing personality. They are the pillars of the house. They have to stand still in the times of crisis. They are the role model for their children.

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