Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is believed that nowadays online shopping is more significant rather going to the malls for shopping. The online shopping on internet of books, air tickets, clothes and groceries is becoming more popular. Nowadays people do prefer buying things on the internet rather than going for shopping by themselves. It is believed by people's that it is the most easiest way of buying and it is mostly preferred. The buying of clothes, mobiles, groceries and booking of movie tickets or flight tickets even food can
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be ordered online by just one touch. You can
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pay the bills by internet. You can buy whatever you want by using your fingertip. Online shopping
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has
plenty of
advantages like
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advantages, like
you can save your
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more than enough in size or scope or capacity
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amount of time. You can sit on your bed and can order
what ever
one or some or every or all without specification
whatever
you want. No need for going into malls and shops. You can
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replace it
of
from a particular thing or place or position
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you are not satisfied with the thing what you ordered. Technology can be used both ways can be good
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sometimes, but
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also has
some adverse effects
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. Which you should take care of. Buying something online on the different sites and giving you bank information should not be safe. And hackers can easily hack the site and
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of you or yourself
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money can be theft. Sometimes you see some products on screen are not the same you receive.
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,
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,
if you buy
online clothes
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online, clothes
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there can be any size issue and the quality of the clothes and the product is not good as we want. So coming up with the conclusion I believe that online shopping has more adverse effects rather than the advantages. So the advantages of shopping
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way doesn't outweigh the disadvantages.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • time-saving
  • wide selection
  • competitive prices
  • discounts
  • accessibility
  • global marketplace
  • availability
  • fraud
  • scams
  • lack of
  • physical interaction
  • personal experience
  • impersonal
  • customer service
  • delays
  • delivery
  • return process
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