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Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. Some people believe that governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Some people believe that
governments
 of richer
nations
 should do more to help poorer
nations
 improve their healthcare, education and trade. I completely agree with
this
 view. There are two main reasons why
governments
 of wealthier
nations
 should provide more assistance to poorer
nations
.
First,
in contributing to the development of the latter, that brings indirect benefits to the former themselves. The poorer basic social services and economic opportunities in a country are, the more
of
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its people attempt to emigrate in search of a better life, worsening the problem of illegal immigration for richer countries.
In addition
, poverty and underdevelopment make a country extremely prone to civil conflicts; when these happen, as they currently are in parts of the Middle East and Africa, what the developed world has to deal with is no longer simply rampant illegal immigration but massive refugee crises. The second of said reasons is a moral one. Making a greater effort to help developing
nations
 improve the
wellbeing
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 of their citizens is a very commendable thing for
governments
 of developed
nations
 to do. My opinion is that no humans in the
21 st
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21st
 century deserve to live in severe material deprivation; it does not stand to reason that
while
 we have successfully travelled into space, a significant proportion of humanity still does not have access to clean running water, go hungry on a regular basis and die premature deaths because of a lack of basic healthcare. In conclusion, my conviction is that
governments
 of first-world countries should do more to help third-world countries improve their basic social services and economies.
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