4. Tourism is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue to many countries, but its disadvantages should not be overlooked. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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With the advanced development of various transport methods, it is more affordable for citizens to travel aboard for their vocations;

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tourism

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is booming in many countries worldwide.

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, the negative impacts on local societies brought by tourists should be assessed. To start with, tourists will disturb local residents daily life a

ctivities even

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activities, even

though they create revenue incomes for local governments. Local entertainment activities and festivals create some inconvenience to local resident in many ways.

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, vehicles hired for tourists will lead to traffic congestion. The festival activities held for tourists will cause traffic jams as well.

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, local native resources will be redistributed to meet the demand of tourists, which will result in h

igh

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higher

prices or shortage for local residents.

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, increasing

tourism

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in many countries will lead to many illegal activities in local communities.

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, with the increasing entertainment in bars, substance abuse and crime rate will surge in the regions.

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, local residents will be influenced by the novel ideas brought by visitors, which may lead to their personal valves change as well. Local residents, s

pecial

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specially

the youth, might pick up bad habits from visitors,

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as substance u

sage,

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use

or smoking. In summary,

tourism

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will contribute to l

ocal economy;

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the local economy

local economies

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, it

also

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disturbs local residents' traditional daily lives due to t

ourists'

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tourist

activities. Without strict guiding tourists, they

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create many potential illegal issues when they enjoy their happy hours.

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, local governments should provide safety instruction for visitors and assist

tourism

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companies to establish r

ight agenda

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the right agenda

for visitors to follow.

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Your opinion

Some people believe the professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends. To that extent do you agree or disagree.

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?