4. Tourism is becoming increasingly important as a source of revenue to many countries, but its disadvantages should not be overlooked. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the advanced development of various transport methods, it is more affordable for citizens to travel aboard for their vocations;

therefore

,

tourism

is booming in many countries worldwide.

However

, the negative impacts on local societies brought by tourists should be assessed. To start with, tourists will disturb local residents daily life a

ctivities even

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activities, even

though they create revenue incomes for local governments. Local entertainment activities and festivals create some inconvenience to local resident in many ways.  

For example

, vehicles hired for tourists will lead to traffic congestion. The festival activities held for tourists will cause traffic jams as well.

Moreover

, local native resources will be redistributed to meet the demand of tourists, which will result in h

igh

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higher

prices or shortage for local residents.

In addition

, increasing

tourism

in many countries will lead to many illegal activities in local communities.

For example

, with the increasing entertainment in bars, substance abuse and crime rate will surge in the regions.

Furthermore

, local residents will be influenced by the novel ideas brought by visitors, which may lead to their personal valves change as well. Local residents, s

pecial

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specially

the youth, might pick up bad  habits from visitors,

such

as substance u

sage,

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use

or smoking.  In summary,

tourism

will contribute to l

ocal economy;

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the local economy

local economies

however

, it

also

disturbs local residents' traditional daily lives due to t

ourists'

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tourist

activities. Without strict guiding tourists, they

also

create many potential illegal issues when they enjoy their happy hours. 

Therefore

, local governments should provide safety instruction for visitors and assist

tourism

companies to establish r

ight agenda

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the right agenda

for visitors to follow.